It is told that death goes this way
The sketch curls into the bone white;
vines gather.
A tree limb contorts
to where a moon will rise,
a heavy graphite sky
drips into shadowed
corners.
The sun is my memory,
has its light upon everything
as it spools the green,
and a sprig leaves a snag of it
against an oblique cloud.
The incline of the park
chases upward--
a steady stream of strollers
marching through a ray
as an arc gathers enough
light to brighten you;
It is the lines
and marks that fade first
as you meld with other faces.
And then there is just
the outline of you
tilting over the water.
I know it is the water
because it draws a bowing moon
and treads the light.
And no one told me
you can see the end
in a single point.
It is the darkness within the dark
that gives it away
and through the incision,
the snowing sky
casts an eternal day.
The poetic structure is unique - this is a poem to be read at heart, rather than simply picked up and read aloud to an audience; for that to happen, they have to understand the subliminal essence of this poem.
In a way, they have to be like crumbled paper - they have to represent themselves as the ilk which is incapable of anything outwardly distorted, but rather far too introverted to be put aside as mere fodder for compensation...
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